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Re: New NVA website - proofreaders needed

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Just Flicking through - the emotive statement CD player isn't a product any longer, I think.
Could 'buy ebay store' link to the ebay store.
Speaker cables page has upgrade option info on it - others don't (perhaps just leave it to the 'how we trade' section here - it's on the listings in Ebay if someone is buying).
No sure about the words introducing the statement range - a bit OTT? (I know it came from the archive site). I've seen some other words about Statement somewhere - I'll try to dig them out.
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The emotive statement CD player should only be showing in the archive section (I think?).

The Buy on EBay links will work when site goes live.

Upgrade option - yeah I wasn't sure about that one. Include on all pages, some or just the upgrade page. I can't decide but think it might be a good option to include in a few places to remind people that are new the NVA of the great upgrade option. Thoughts?

Agree regarding statement stuff - needs photos and copy.
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selby wrote:The emotive statement CD player should only be showing in the archive section (I think?).

The Buy on EBay links will work when site goes live.

Upgrade option - yeah I wasn't sure about that one. Include on all pages, some or just the upgrade page. I can't decide but think it might be a good option to include in a few places to remind people that are new the NVA of the great upgrade option. Thoughts?

Agree regarding statement stuff - needs photos and copy.
Sorry - CD player is in the archive. I said I was hopping around. Maybe the archive pages need a different design (something like blue or brown as a font colour rather than black) otherwise it's a bit difficult to tell they aren't current products. Or perhaps a page between ( Archive -> Page --> Statement/Black box) which explains that these are the old products/reviews. Or maybe take the archive link off the top menu and put it towards the bottom of the front page - or something just to make it different.
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I think the holding page in between would work. So you click on archive it explains they are old reviews and info and then you click on black box or statement. I'll update it later tonight and let you know so you can see what you think.
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That T.I.S. Is bloody gorgeous!
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You've still got that malformed link for the phonos The link to https:// xxxxx/phono-head-amplifiers/ reads https:// xxxxx/phono-stages/
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Missed that one...thanks Slinger.

I've got to update the footer so I'll triple check all the links.
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I've divided up the archive pages a little, think it does work better and will be less confusing...the copy on the holding page needs a little love so any recommendations welcome...my head is fried tonight.
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Re: New NVA website - proofreaders needed

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http://www.klang-projekt.de/nva.htm

This is a German site that contains archive information about NVA.

I am beginning to get a bit concerned about the archive, as there is much like the turntable, and The Tube amps missing from it. Maybe it is better to leave it in the archive site but just link to it as the archive site is staying up. What do people think.

http://www.klang-projekt.de/nva_geraete_the_tube.htm

http://hifisubjectivist.org/viewtopic.php?f=15&t=45461

http://www.vinylengine.com/turntable_fo ... ge_id=2404

Look down the thread list for Cube1 Cube2 and Cubix threads pictures there.

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I remember seeing this page before http://www.klang-projekt.de/verstaerker.htm and wondering if the person was either some kind if reseller or simply an enthusiast with info on their site.

That cube looks cool by the way!

I can either reproduce this information on the new site or link to it, it's entirely up to you and what other people think.
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