New NVA website - proofreaders needed

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This amplifier is designed to provide an extremely high quality dynamic output. The unit should remain powered-up indefinitely for best sound -- power consumption is minimal. Connect a CD player to your AP10P and marvel at what you've been missing with you.

After "best sound" there is one too many hyphens. Also the wording of the last sentence is wrong. BTW I do think the gold NVA logo looks much better.
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jimbob wrote:This amplifier is designed to provide an extremely high quality dynamic output. The unit should remain powered-up indefinitely for best sound -- power consumption is minimal. Connect a CD player to your AP10P and marvel at what you've been missing with you.

After "best sound" there is one too many hyphens. Also the wording of the last sentence is wrong. BTW I do think the gold NVA logo looks much better.
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Veeeery nice and comprehensive site !!

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We want to add user reviews to the product listings so if you have written one here in the past then link to it for us, or if you want to have ago at one please do.

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Please don't put mine in, its crap.

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Anyone who honestly says what they think then it cannot be crap. I am not looking for pro type reviews just honest opinions.

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I've fixed the links to eBay now so products link through to that specific category now.
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Doc - long shot but you have a copy of the photo/magazine of the NVA Challenge article from Audiophile in 1991?

Only asking as the banner image I've used is rather pixelated as I had to copy it from the old archive site, be nice to have a clearer one. If you do I could scan it so it's higher res.
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Sorry no.

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Was worth a punt, I'll try to clean up the screen grab...

I'm not going to be online much tomorrow but I'll try to check in at some point to see if anything major that needs fixing. I've done all the Google/Bing stuff and started on the external SEO link building.
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But I would love a cheeky little AP10, AP20 sort of amp for a bedroom setup...

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Oracle Storage / Mezzanine Floors

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