New NVA website - proofreaders needed

[_D_S_J_R_]

This is a stupid thing and nowt to do with the page itself, but since I have the sample of AP20 pictured I believe, may I say that it DOESN'T need to be left powered 24/7 for best results. It took at least half an hour when I first used it, but not now...

I ONLY say this as it may put some people off

[jimbob]

In the statement range archive the paragraph "Below you find... Statement range." The wording doesn't seem quite right. "Below you CAN find..." sounds better to me.

[selby]

Thanks - I've made that change.

[MK1LN4E:)]

I'm not keen on the colour of the "learn more and buy" links would suit more of a grey or silver colour to me, Also I think it would look more professional to say "full details."

[jimbob]

Just a couple of things. For the power amplifiers, where the speaker cable recommendations are there should be an 'a' in "...for small cost". Also for the AP10P I think it should say 'base of integrated amplifier(s)'.

[selby]

Just a couple of things. For the power amplifiers, where the speaker cable recommendations are there should be an 'a' in "...for small cost". Also for the AP10P I think it should say 'base of integrated amplifier(s)'.

Thanks - corrected these.

[selby]

I'm not keen on the colour of the "learn more and buy" links would suit more of a grey or silver colour to me, Also I think it would look more professional to say "full details."

I'll look into the colour, I'm trying to introduce the NVA gold/yellow colour in a subtle way so the site doesn't end up too grey but will tweak it. I'll update the copy to Full Details as it looks nicer. There is still some thought going into if the website will directly sell products or simply redirect people to the eBay store, this will have an impact on the language used on buttons on the individual product pages.

[selby]

There's been a few amends to the site including photos of A70, A80 and P90 be great if any of you can give the site a final check for errors/typos before we look to flip it live.

Thanks to anyone who helps.

[zebbo]

In the speakers section if you click on Cube2 & Cube1 "Full Details" it just takes you back to the same page.

The site generally looks very nice, very slick and very shiney!

[jimbob]

Not sure if this was intentional but on my mobile there is no way of supersizing the photos. If i zoom in on the screen it just becomes pixelated and blurry. I have not tried it on the pc so I do not know if there is the option to click on the photos to zoom and supersize.

Also I personally think the click boxes saying 'buy ebay store' would be better saying simply 'buy'. Just my opinion and apart from these couple of points I think the website looks fantastic. However, I am slightly worried that such a smart looking website will result in the Doc being completely rushed off his feet with orders... I was hoping to upgrade to an AP20 over the next couple of months!!!